Identity
A Poem by
Tina Kline
My skin is alabaster white I live only for the night My teeth - Ivory - Razor sharp I'm not sure if alive is my heart I am huntress - I am Predator Blood lust - I stopped asking "What for?" I am scarred by immortality Giving Death is now my legacy I try to love - They quickly die Crimson tears I seem always to cry So I bring them over to keep them alive Together - We live - Together - We survive My eyes bleed - My hunger gives me pain To escape - Suicide - It is in vain Death cannot touch that which is me So am I caged? - Or am I truly free?
© 2010 Tina Kline
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Interesting question. Are immortals free or are they really 'caged'?
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very good and creepy
Posted 13 Years Ago
very good and creepy
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
awesome piece.... love the detail in this and great ending..overall nice job on this .. a very impressive piece!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
awesome piece.... love the detail in this and great ending..overall nice job on this .. a very impressive piece!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It's a really great poem :D
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's a really great poem :D
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
great title and i like the ending...very thought provoking...good write...
Posted 13 Years Ago
great title and i like the ending...very thought provoking...good write...
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
wow; so many complexities
written so very smoothly
i felt so much emotion
and i tried to answered the questions
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow; so many complexities
written so very smoothly
i felt so much emotion
and i tried to answered the questions
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
A very good poem. To not be able to die. That would be a curse. I like the story in this short poem. It feels like a lead for a book. You create a strong and interesting character. A outstanding poem. I like the ending.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A very good poem. To not be able to die. That would be a curse. I like the story in this short poem. It feels like a lead for a book. You create a strong and interesting character. A outstanding poem. I like the ending.
Coyote
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I like this. A perfect identity for a vampire. Yet not quite a pleased or happy vampire.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like this. A perfect identity for a vampire. Yet not quite a pleased or happy vampire.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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