Identity

Identity

A Poem by Tina Kline

My skin is alabaster white
I live only for the night
My teeth - Ivory - Razor sharp
I'm not sure if alive is my heart

I am huntress - I am Predator
Blood lust - I stopped asking "What for?"
I am scarred by immortality
Giving Death is now my legacy

I try to love - They quickly die
Crimson tears I seem always to cry
So I bring them over to keep them alive
Together - We live - Together - We survive

My eyes bleed - My hunger gives me pain
To escape - Suicide - It is in vain
Death cannot touch that which is me
So am I caged? - Or am I truly free?

© 2010 Tina Kline


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Interesting question. Are immortals free or are they really 'caged'?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good and creepy

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome piece.... love the detail in this and great ending..overall nice job on this .. a very impressive piece!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a really great poem :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

great title and i like the ending...very thought provoking...good write...

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow; so many complexities
written so very smoothly
i felt so much emotion
and i tried to answered the questions


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem. To not be able to die. That would be a curse. I like the story in this short poem. It feels like a lead for a book. You create a strong and interesting character. A outstanding poem. I like the ending.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this. A perfect identity for a vampire. Yet not quite a pleased or happy vampire.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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