Graveyard Rose

Written for Creative Poetry Group.

In the swirling mists coiling about the graveyard

She stood there, white as marble and just as unreal looking

Her eyes were like two coals burning in the dark

Her fanged smile was seductive and alluring

She moved like a ghost as she walked from the graveyard

Out on the night dark city street she seemed to glow

Her tight black dress gave her a tempting Gothic charm

But death was her love and all she had ever known

“Come to me” her pale lips seemed to be saying

She knew one special man would soon be her victim

She was all inviting lust with such sweet promises

He would be hers before he knew his lethal situation

“You want me.” Her shimmering eyes seemed to express

And yes he did, he wanted her so very badly

She opened her arms and he willingly entered her embrace

He eagerly gave himself to her, gave himself gladly

In the misty dark shadows she loved him as only a vampire could

He surrendered to the ecstasy that he'd never experienced before

She devoured his blood and took his life away from him

In the arms of the sexiest woman ever his life ended with horror

Satisfied now she drifted back to her dark graveyard

A smile on her marble face that didn't really say anything

Her grave was waiting and she gladly returned to its comfort

Come night she'd once more rise to ease her constant hunger pain

Reviews

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

fantastic descriptive imagery..... it seemed all too real.... yikes!!!!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very cold and lethal vampire, but very seductive. Takes me back to the days when vampires were deadly and always very hungry. An excellent vampire poem.

[Black Cat Fever]

Like a true seductress...she's a dangerous predator. Nicely done!

[KAREN]

Excellent write, great imagery!

[Sheila Kline]

Wow what a love feast! Your words are dripping with vivid imagery to draw any reader right into the middle of this banquet of sanguine delights!
Very nice.....I like this one!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent read! The imagery was superb! Chilling and haunting, well written.

[Star Wolf]

Chilling and beautiful. Very visual and well written. I enjoyed this awesome poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sensually kill. I love the graveyard scene as she emerges from it. You have added many grand details into this piece.