Lips

Lips

A Poem by Titan
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One of my favorites so far.

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Lips

brushing, joining, mashing

kissing.

Tongues

pushing, jostling, playing

laughing.

Hands

holding, squeezing, guiding

inviting.

Pink rosy cheeks

caressed by fingertips,

smiles emerge

with unified

lips.


© 2010 Titan


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Damn this is one sensual masterpiece! o_o
Sexy!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That is just so fantastic. I miss my boyfriend...boohoo. I need a new one. I love it.
Good job, Titan
xxoo Kisses from me...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What I like best about your writing so far is that it's just fun to read. I was immediately pulled in by the centered alignment and small to large font and then back down again. Basically this captured the kissing excitement, haha very nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this poem. Each word with a purpose. Poem is fun too read. Flow of words moved perfect. The emotion and desire of love is strong in the words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, sweet poem, very descriptive, i like it. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


16 views & only one review. What a shame because this poem is also very well written, I like the small rhyme at the end. The short descreptive verbs cast a variety of images into the reader's head. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


you have a way with writing simply and sweetly minus the cheesy

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2010
Last Updated on February 23, 2010
Tags: young love, exploration, curiosity, love, romance, innocence, youth

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Titan
Titan

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I'm just a teenager who writes about what he cannot express in words. Oh, and by the way, I'm gay. -- I am quite thankful for all the reviewers and readers. Never would I have thought that any .. more..

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