Love Is Just Whispers and Alcohol

 

Drink up the night sky

So sweet, unquenchable

Neon lights blur and swirl

Around the edges of my vision

 

Insidiously lit by a summer moon

The night hisses and hums

Like my mind is stuck between

The stations of a radio

 

The sky is the way I’ve always

Pictured you, soft and flowing

Here and gone too soon

A beautiful mystery

 

And I sit and ponder

Elbows on the counter

I’m like these glasses

Lined up on the bar

 

Drunk

Reviews

[DeletedUser]

I love this. I agree with the poster before me: your poetry is intoxicating and addicting. All the emotions you express are things i've felt before and couldn't quite place, and you have a unique ability to be able to put them into words. Keep on writing, because I can't get enough.

[writing mojo]

100% percent proof..your style is intoxicating a well placed craft prefect and brilliant.....amazing stuff

[Kenneth The Poet]

Beautifully abrupt ending. And the rest of it, just brilliant.

[Rene Velez]

great poem, third stanza is awesome, great lines in this one....

[Lily Mae]

I could feel it myself...great description... the wonders of the lined up elbows and glassed.. nice...x