Once Upon A TIme

I had love

Once upon a time

No it wasn't a fairy tale

For the ending was non to happy

 

We were young

Once upon a time

Fooled by our hearts

Masters of disguise

 

Her eyes mine

Once upon a time

Now wandering

To those of another guy's

 

I was blind

Once upon a time

Couldn't believe she would do this

Couldn't believe she wouldd leave

 

She was a facade

Who wanted back in my life

She asked if I loved her

And I replied "Once upon a time"

 

 

 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Karma is a biatch.... yes, indeed... I like how you made this come full circle.. very nicely done..

The use of repetition is useful here and adds to the journey through heartbreak, rejection, loneliness, and retribution.. The flow was pleasant and helped the reader feel as if pulled into your world caught up in the emotion and confusion..

have one question.. did you mean "none" in the fourth line?

Overall, really nice job, I enjoyed...