Cease IV

Cease IV

A Poem by Tom27

To give up now
Is to surrender your liberty
And your soul on a silver platter
To which you shall yield and accept this vast forsaken expanse
To be your new hearth for eternity
Strive now or forever hold your peace.

© 2016 Tom27


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A final warning?!! For what should I strive?!
T

Posted 9 Months Ago


here is something about this format that befits you nicely. Like your poem "Finale", terse and
resolute without even a spoonful of pity. Like waving at someone from the shore or watching
the phone as it sits on your night stand, ringing. Sometimes the soul, having done what the seasoned soul
does, surrenders...

absolutely marvelous......dana

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Rye
Short, and to the point, nicely written and presented.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tom27

4 Years Ago

Thank you! Would not want to take my reader's time too much eh? Hehe

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