Cease IV

To give up now
Is to surrender your liberty
And your soul on a silver platter
To which you shall yield and accept this vast forsaken expanse
To be your new hearth for eternity
Strive now or forever hold your peace.

Reviews

[kentuck14]

A final warning?!! For what should I strive?!
T

[h d e rushin]

here is something about this format that befits you nicely. Like your poem "Finale", terse and
resolute without even a spoonful of pity. Like waving at someone from the shore or watching
the phone as it sits on your night stand, ringing. Sometimes the soul, having done what the seasoned soul
does, surrenders...

absolutely marvelous......dana

[Rye]

Short, and to the point, nicely written and presented.

[Tom27]

Thank you! Would not want to take my reader's time too much eh? Hehe