Drift

Drift

A Poem by Tomi

We Smile,
Say Hello,
Goodbye,
An Elephant in the room: Unaddressed
We DRIFT apart: daily, With a smile on our faces

© 2012 Tomi


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very true words, a great piece... this reminds me of small talk and communicating for the sake of following social convention, it's superficial and makes me uncomfortable.. look how fake that smile is on that face... it is sad..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Funny how we can work with people and know nothing about them. I like the vision create by your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Like this a lot, clever, witty poem, it says a lot about communication.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Great work, Tomi :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice 1 bro

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice Tomi

Posted 11 Years Ago



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