Stoopid in love

love scrambles the brain...

I would swim the 

9 oceans of the world 

to see your smile 

with my own eyes

 

The 7 continents 

- sure they would hold 

no challenge I'd 

trek them all - bare foot !! 

for a single kiss from you

I'd pick up a keepsake 

at each of the 

10 wonders of the world

For your trinket box

Pick a colour from 

the rainbow and I

promise it shall be 

yours forever

I would give 

both my right arms 

just to hold 

your hand

...so here I am on this 

the 15th of February 

to wish you 

Happy Valentines

Author's Note

captcha = twaddell - damn you captcha you old unromantic !!

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Aloha Tony,

... and Happy Valentine's Day from this side of the Pacific.

I enjoyed this one as it was spoken as a true romantic soul... very sweet, very endearing... and adorable on top of everything.

Thanks for sharing this one with us out here...

Alisa ;-)

[Tony Jordan]

Aloha Alisa
Happy belated from the UK.
I'm glad you enjoyed this one my friend.
All the best...
:))

[Alisa Js]

Same to you, from across the way...

Sending you smiles across the miles... ;-) :-)

Alisa

[barleygirl]

Altho I'm not sure, I think these are intentional errors: stoopid, 9 oceans, 7 continents, 10 wonders, & Feb 15th . . . a clever & creative way to SHOW instead of telling how stoopid love has made this narrator. My favorite: "I'd trek them all -- barefoot!" *smile*

[Tina H.W.]

To quote my brother "Meh...it was good" to quote me: This made me smile, really! Even moreso at the date at the end. It's very sweet and endearing and I really liked it! :)

[Samuel Dickens]

Though my old brain has been scrambled to a froth, I smiled at these words. Is there no limit to what we'll do for romance?

[Mary]

Just a darling Valentines poem! As it should be sugar coating on sugar- well done, friend!

[.]

Nicely written words.

Delicate and full of love and longing and wrapped up with those final lines to suggest that, oops, you have missed the day of love! Stoopid indeed! And I imagine many men have found themselves in such a position on Valentine's Day and of course, on Anniversaries, too.

A very nice write, Tony.

[Chris]

All about the heart - as it should be...

[Tabby Mac]

Silly and romantic!
Tabby

[Tabby Mac]

Oh...and clever as always!
Tabby

[Writing Angel]

This Is so sweet ... how I am sure your muse must be just as well

[Tbear]

A bit o sentiment here and a load of love twaddell there and you throw em all together to play, then out come a sweet portion of romanticism by our dear Tony ..write on..

[boygene borice]

I love the flow of the words. They create an impressive imagination in the readers mind.
i can't stop imagining, how the persona will be crossing the 9 oceans,picking a color from the rainbow.
These words are like an electric current,the recipient can't refuse but to give in :)