Suddenly human!

Suddenly human!

A Poem by TonyJustin

I would like you to describe it. Would you? Could you?

Exploded into atoms, but not yet disembarked 
by the time time realizes it's mistake
dogs will have heard the bark;

Eyes flooded, righteously won't stay afloat 
Many a wicked sin, a misanthropic can unload
upon an impersonal island of pseudo bliss
in-activeness in the organs of forced dismiss
can the force of humanness not excel in these waters?
equal the fight with tiny cats and mice alike giving quarters

to hope proclaimed as destiny, swallowing the compromising bite
alast the explosion would rest in me, time to do some right

© 2014 TonyJustin

Author's Note

Any and all feedback and comments are welcome. Never shared any of my poems before, I would say be gentle, but I would rather say be honest. If it speaks to you, speak to me.

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Tony, thanks for sharing your poem. It is complex but really thought provoking

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on June 10, 2014
Last Updated on June 10, 2014
Tags: Humanness, personal, battle, time, right and wrong, inhuman, good, bad, nature, sin, destiny, hope, fight, misantropic, pseudo, bliss



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