The phoenix and the blue eyed angel

The phoenix and the blue eyed angel

A Poem by Spirit_Raven101

Like a phoenix I will rise, from the ashes of depression.

When the world seems gray, and the colors fade away.

I will stretch my wings and let the fire surround me,

let the warmth embrace the empty cold.

Whit my blue eyed angel I feel safe and strong,

and the fire of hope embrace us both.


From the ashes I find hope, as my angel hold around me.

I feel his wings embrace my form,

and the warmth of his move holds me close.

In this dark world of depression and pain,

An angel and phoenix makes there word whit a flicker of hope.


They say that lover conkers all, and in my angels arms I agree.

Even in this broken cold world of depression and pain,

Light can chine and brake trough the clouds.

Every time the world make me crumble to ashes,

Like a phoenix I will rise again and not let the chains hold me down.


What is life if love do not exist, what is life whit out the warmth of light.

Even whit in the darkest of times, light can shine trough.

My blue eyed angel is my savior, he is my light that make me rise form the ashes.

He hold my heart, my life, my sanity within his hands.

His light showing me the path and gives me strength,

His light is the flame that make me rise from the ashes again.


So like the phoenix I will rise from these ashes of despair,

that suffocate me and tries to keep me down.

Because besides my blue eyed angel I can master all,

even this cold dark world we live in.

As the phoenix and blue eyed angel stand against the world.

© 2014 Spirit_Raven101


Author's Note

Spirit_Raven101
Read and enjoy I hope you all will like it, please review and tell me what you think :)

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It is a good poem, about the ones who don't give up, the ones that are probably defeated, but they rise again! I liked the few rhymes you made.
But, you have some spelling mistakes: you mostly wrote "whit", and not "with", and also "without" is one word.

Keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Stand tall against the world no matter how dark no matter how hard it become he will stand there strong and proud of his phoenix for in this world nothing is stronger than the love of the angel and his phoenix. Love you babe.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Spirit_Raven101

9 Years Ago

Loves you too hun, and thank you for the wonderful review. i am happy i have my blue eyed angel to k.. read more

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Spirit_Raven101
Spirit_Raven101

Sogn og frodane, Slinde, Norway



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Hello I'm a Hobby writer age 23, my fiance told me about this place to help whit my writing and so on. I just hope you all like my work and can help me improve. Sense i was little i loved making short.. more..

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