Broken Mends the Broken Wings

Love and lust and other dreams
Tend to lead to my broken wings

That I tend to mend...
With broken things.

Reviews

[bobc]

Short poems are wonderful imo. Each word becomes important. This one included.

Suggestions...I'm wondering if you need 'my' from 'Tend to lead to my broken wings' or 'That' from the third line. I read this piece without those words and it feels stronger...imo of course.

Thanx...bob