Not Going To Lie.

Not Going To Lie.

A Poem by Bri
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Just some feelings I feel towards bullying.

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You told me I was stupid.

Ugly.

Lonely.

Hated.

And I was, because I believed it myself.

I believed that I was ugly.

Lonely.

Hated.

I believed it all.

Until one day.

I looked in the mirror and saw someone that was better than you.

I saw someone who was beautiful.

Someone creative.

Smart.

Loved.

Someone worth something.

All things that you weren't.

I can't hate you for feeling sorry for yourself and trying to make someone crash and burn for your benefit.

I'm not going to lie, your beautiful.

But you don't know it.

And that's what makes you ugly.

You go around hating yourself for not being someone else but guess what.

Your you, and that's the best that you'll ever do.

So love yourself.

It's the only way anyone can ever love you.

© 2014 Bri


Author's Note

Bri
Please tell me if this poem is interesting or a waste of time. Was it boring? Did it have emotion? Please tell me, I love your comments.

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Gosh im crying, no lie I am .
its beautiful bri , the mixed emotions of love , hate, strength
sympathy , touching to the heart it was more then
intresting it was worth all my time.
ive been feeling like this for days and now I feel like I can
see agin ive been believeing wen somone tells me im
ugly but now my eyes are open. =,)
wonderful read.
sheri~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

aww thanks sher-bear, I've sent your pic by the way. :D



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*Claps* So true. I love the message. Its a very straightforward piece that rings true for everyone, whether they're the one who feels run down or the one doing the running down. It flowed well and struck home so good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Really well written piece, I am looking forward to reading more of your materials that are posted and hoping you are writing more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I will.
It is not at all boring..you nailed it.
Your value is far above the whims or thoughts of others...Bravo.
The emotion came through quite well....do not be so unsure...you have talent.
I liked it.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

Thank you, that means a lot. I'm still really new at writing poems so I wasn't really sure.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

smile....trust me...you have talent !!!
S.
Gosh im crying, no lie I am .
its beautiful bri , the mixed emotions of love , hate, strength
sympathy , touching to the heart it was more then
intresting it was worth all my time.
ive been feeling like this for days and now I feel like I can
see agin ive been believeing wen somone tells me im
ugly but now my eyes are open. =,)
wonderful read.
sheri~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bri

10 Years Ago

aww thanks sher-bear, I've sent your pic by the way. :D

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Writer's City , CA



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