Summer Slips Away

Summer Slips Away

A Poem by Trace
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Short poem

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Autumn oh Autumn
Sneaking in on a whisper
Summer slips away

© 2014 Trace


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Haiku personified. I do sometimes miss seasons. Although there is change in Vegas. It's only hot, or less hot.

bill

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

4 Years Ago

oh, it can get dam cold there too. but I know what you mean,
Thanks for the read and commen.. read more
Short indeed but nevertheless delightful. Another good un, N

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your great comments.

Trace
I liked this very much, Trace. Summer never quite leaves here in South Florida, but the extreme heat and humidity do slip away a bit. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Summer has been hanging on here but I am sure it won't last.

Thank you for your wonderf.. read more
And we don't know how it happened it snuck up so quietly. I'm reminded of Carl Sandberg's poem about fog (how it sneaks in on cat feet). Short and sweet..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Nice to see you.

Trace
Autumn sneaks, summer slips. This is very nice. I would encourage you to do haiku more often! Seems like you have the knack for it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you for the wonderful comments and compliments on this poem.

Trace
Stunning. Welcome back sweetie!

:) Julie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend
Thank you........

Trace
Speaking to the season and a person, I think. Loved this Trace:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

We are actually having Autumn here in the Rockies this year.
No snow in the valley yet but the.. read more
Short but impact-full. Excellent, sir...:)......................

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

A rare haiku from me. So glad you liked it.

Trace.
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
Very nice I especially love that middle line. Beautiful Haiku xx

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Don't do haiku very often but I am just getting my feet wet again here.

Thank you for y.. read more
Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
Just getting my feet wet in the autumn breezes.

Trace
A haiku is always welcome to a poet who has been away from writing for a while. It's akin to dipping your toes into the water. Very nice.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Yes....yes. I am so glad you enjoyed this little scribble.

Trace

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