First Embrace

What happened next from "A Pondering Moon"

  

The sand was warm between their toes
As they held on to each other...

Not wanting this first embrace to ever end

As their lips explored the unknown taste of something new
Until their knees grew weary and they fell together to the beach

                And the pondering moon hung low.

Hands that once clung now began to explore
To touch where each had only dreamed of

Haste was the order in which buttons were undone
And clothes that bound were quickly shed
That they could feel the exquisite connection they knew had always existed

Passions controlled their every move
Which felt as natural as the waves that moved the sands

Eager lips found her swelling breasts
Soft hands found the strength of the man she so desired

                And a tender moan escaped her smile

This was what they had both waited for

                And as she guided him in to her warmth
                                Their lips met again

With a promise under the pondering moon

                           to never part....

Author's Note

See my poem: " A Pondering Moon "

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Definitely ramped up the sexuality here, but done with beautiful description that imparts their eagerness to be together and complete. Despite the more explicit feeling, there is still a feel of relaxing into this moment rather than rushing through it.

[Trace]

I so appreciate your excellent comments and wonderful compliments.
I do enjoy writing about thie human emotion and expressions of love.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Well this is quite the sequel to the first one, Trace! Sizzling and sensual, your words are so descriptive. You turn the reader into the voyeur here. Excellent work. Lydi**

[Trace]

You honor me with such beautiful compliments.
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on my little scribbles.

Trace

[Tiana]

A soft, beautiful and sensual poem! Wonderfully penned!

[Trace]

You can probably relate to this poem better than someone landlocked like myself
Good thing I have a vivid imagination.

Thanks again for you excellent comments and compliments.

Trace

[KAREN]

Beautiful, romantic, and touches the heart.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments on this piece.

Trace

[KAREN]

It was really an enjoyable read!

[Chloe Grant]

This is absolutely lovely, the imagery and the words actually makes me feel like I'm there. This is awesome.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.
It starts with the poem: A Pondering Moon.
Not sure where it will end.... hopefully never...

Trace

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Trace... so tender and sensual... Blooming
as a flower whose petals want to be kissed and
caressed by the seaside in moonlight musings of
pure delight. truly... Pat

[Trace]

I had to do a continuation from the Pondering Moon poem. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Trace

[Woody]

barring "haste" and "quickly shed", the whole poem felt deliciously languid like small waves, of a calm sea, kissing the shore.
exquisite write, Trace.

[Trace]

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.

Trace

[Confuser]

I enjoyed it; brought back many times at the beach, quite nearby. Thank you. The imagery is beautiful. Thank you.

[Trace]

I am so glad this stirred memories
Thank you for sharing and commenting on my writing.

Trace

[Confuser]

Thank you. Dale

[M]

What a beautiful and amazing poem, love yr words choices, and it just feels relaxing reading those tender words "    And the pondering moon hung low.

Hands that once clung now began to explore
To touch where each had only dreamed of" :)

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments on my writing.

Trace

[Cat :3]

This is amazing, wow I can't stop reading it :)

[Trace]

That is the most wonderful compliment anyone could ask for.

Thank you so very much. read moreThat is the most wonderful compliment anyone could ask for.

Thank you so very much.

Trace