Endlessly ~ Trace and MsJewel Collaboration

Endlessly ~ Trace and MsJewel Collaboration

A Poem by Trace
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A love poem collaboration

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A timeless night a misty dawn when all is calm but me
and soft visions that steal my dreams

 

Linger tenderly,

 

As right before this blissful day romance began to bloom
through sunshine skies that brighten eyes

 

And dance across the room,

 

As graceful as a butterfly, yet warm as a flame
for one moment of mystery

 

Surrender called my name,

 

And like a moth drawn to that flame something happened to me
the fire burning in my heart

 

Was pure as love could be,


For with each breath, every heartbeat, forever intertwined
of timeless nights, or misty dawns,

 

Endlessly 

You’re mine.

© 2015 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
Art by Lauri blank
words by MsJewel and Trace

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This flows, so, so gently. The moth similie is my highlight; I love that they fly into brightness. I'd be interested to know how two people pieced this together, collaborations are always fascinating!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Sometimes we will start with a verse sent from one to another
Sometimes we have a poem that w.. read more
I enjoyed everything about this piece. The font, the rhythm, the subject. And most of all, the simplicity. Especially in the very last two lines. Awesome collaboration.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Your comments and compliments are so appreciated.
Thank you very much.

Trace
You two write so well together, and always succeed in creating such romantic poems, full of passion, and full of love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Poetry collaborations are easy when they come from the heart.

Thank you so very much .. read more
dear Trace and Julie... an endearing valentine
poem that has stolen my heart.
Sweet and romantic... like feathers against
a storm of peace and love. Amen ....
truly... Pat

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you Pat for your wonderful comments and compliments on our collaboration poem.

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Timeless and graceful indeed. May the fire of love keep.burning and may your talents kerp.sharing. Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

It is always a treat to write with Julie.
She has such an incredible talent and we feed off .. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)...
This poem brings back wonderful memories...
where did those days go when we could spend hour after hour writing together....

thank you for sharing this today. :)
Hugs, Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

We have learned to write incredible poetry in a lot less time.
However.
I will always .. read more
when everything is calm but me. That right there speaks volumes. A lovely poem from the both of you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for reading and leaving such a wonderful compliment.

Trace

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Added on February 8, 2015
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Tags: Endless love, Romance, Collaboration

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