Rain, Rain, Why must it Rain

Rain, Rain, Why must it Rain

A Poem by Trace
"

She said: It's raining, this sucks, I said: Write a poem about the feelings that rain brings to you.

"


Tell me:

How the clouds hang low and forbid the sun from warming the sands on your beach
How the thought of those tiny grains between your toes will be cool to the touch

How wishing for sunlight to bless your face is lost in the dreary grays and misty rains

Tell me how your heart feels saddened

Yet you know the rains will wash away the dull
And brighten the blooms that feed off the the heavenly showers



 When will the sun peek through to brighten your day
 When will your face reflect the glow and your smile shine as brightly

I long for that smile and wish you beautiful images to dream about


May the rains be a blessing to you 

And to the flowers

In your garden of life.

© 2015 Trace


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Trace
For my friend on a rainy day

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This poem could be written to ME! I am a sunshine girl. It is obvious that the narrator adores the one who is saddened by the rain. He understands her deeply, and wishes her happiness. He is blessed to see her joyful, and is tender to her in her dark times. My favorite lines:

How the clouds hang low and forbid the sun from warming the sands on your beach

How wishing for sunlight to bless your face is lost in the dreary grays and misty rains

I long for that smile and wish you beautiful images to dream about

So absolutely beautiful.



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

You honor me with such beautiful comments and compliments.
Thank you dear friend for reading .. read more



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So thoughtful and well written. I know it brightened up your friend's day!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much, Julie did write a poem of her own about our conversation,
Hope you .. read more
Thank you for this wonderful poem Trace. Your inspiration gave my rainy day afternoon an added burst of sunshine...but you always warm me up when I'm cold.
Love you lots.
Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dearest friend for your wonderful comments and compliments,
I hope you h.. read more
This poem could be written to ME! I am a sunshine girl. It is obvious that the narrator adores the one who is saddened by the rain. He understands her deeply, and wishes her happiness. He is blessed to see her joyful, and is tender to her in her dark times. My favorite lines:

How the clouds hang low and forbid the sun from warming the sands on your beach

How wishing for sunlight to bless your face is lost in the dreary grays and misty rains

I long for that smile and wish you beautiful images to dream about

So absolutely beautiful.



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

You honor me with such beautiful comments and compliments.
Thank you dear friend for reading .. read more

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