Whispering Winds

Whispering Winds

A Poem by Trace
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A love Sonnet

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Whispering winds blow your heart near to me

Desire runs deep, passions unfolding

The want in your soul is so plain to see

With you by my side, your heart I’ll be holding,

 

Sweet breezes stirring a vision so clear

My senses aroused, I feel your soft touch

Breathless, I’m fighting this urge when you’re near

The brush of your lips is almost too much,

 

Embraced in my arms, sweet comfort sublime

Your head on my chest, my strong arms surround

Eyes of an angel peer deeply in mine

With eternal bliss in this joy profound,

 

Together as one this feeling has grown,

From whispering winds; a love of our own.

© 2015 Trace


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Trace
Form poetry, a love sonnet

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Beautifully worded, truly a romantic piece. Just started covering Poetry in my classroom, and the final writing assignment is for each student to compose a sonnet. When they accomplish the task, each student receives a badge that proclaims "I Am a Sonneteer!" You, Sir, have earned your badge with this poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

I am truly honored with your comments and compliments..
Thank you so very much.

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dearTrace💜 Your love sonnet is a love locket of poetic
encounters... to be worn close to her heart... truly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you Pat for reading and leaving such a wonderful compliment on my poem.

Trace
A lovely lyrical sonnet this is. Sweet and romantic.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your wonderful compliments.

Trace
Beautifully worded, truly a romantic piece. Just started covering Poetry in my classroom, and the final writing assignment is for each student to compose a sonnet. When they accomplish the task, each student receives a badge that proclaims "I Am a Sonneteer!" You, Sir, have earned your badge with this poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

I am truly honored with your comments and compliments..
Thank you so very much.

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The rhyme scheme is simply mesmerizing. The content is velvety soft sensuality. So very romantic, Trace. Whispering winds...heavy sigh! Wonderful work. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend for your lovely compliments.
Hope you get to enjoy many whispering .. read more
You have become a master at this form Trace. So beautiful in content and in structure. Going into my favs.

Hugs, Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you my lovely friend for you wonderful compliments and inspiration.

HUGGS. ..... read more
This is simply awesomeTrace. The images are sensual and romantic, building up to the last line which puts it all together beautifully.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Your compliments mean the world to me,

Thank you so very much,

Trace
I love me a good sonnet and I think this is a pretty good sonnet

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Trace

6 Years Ago

So glad you stopped to read and comment on my poem.
Your compliments are greatly appreciated... read more
This is a fantastic piece of work, start to finish! I like everything about
this piece from, picture, message, format, well done, I applaud this
no doubt, thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much, I am glad you enjoyed this little scribble.
Your comments are grea.. read more

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Trace

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