Breathless

Give me a moment to catch my breath

But don’t stop what you’re doing

Hold me tight through this little death

We can’t stop our hearts from trembling,

 

Let’s give in to this powerful need

Take from me what you desire

I can’t help but crave with greed

The passion that builds this fire,

 

You know what you do to me

When my yearning becomes restless

Let that wild obsession free

As we drive each other breathless,

 

Brush your lips against my skin

Touch me with your eyes

Feel the heat as this fervor begins

Listening to your pleasured sighs,

 

Hold me tight; don’t ever let go

Draw me within your pleasure

Let the love that is in your soul

Be the souvenir of your treasure,

 

You know what you do to me

When your yearning becomes restless

Let that wild obsession free

As we drive each other breathless,

 

I love what you do to me

When our yearning becomes restless

Again we’ll let wild obsessions free

And drive each other breathless.

Reviews

[Sarah]

Oh my! What a heated little poem. So subtle yet so outspoken. I love how you let the reader intuit what you are saying. I honestly read this poem twice it was so good. It captured my attention, and left me wanting more. It made me think of my own intimate sessions... Breathless.

[Trace]

I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. (pun intended)
Erotic poetry can be so without being overtly nasty,
Sensuality should be subtle and leave the reader wanting more...

Thank you for your excellent compliments,

Trace

[Bare trees]

I like this very much. You show a sexy and erotic side to yourself. The picture interprets happiness and lust at the same time for me.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.
I am honored that you liked it.

Trace

[JayceeC]

I'm partial to modified refrains, and this one is gorgeous. Just the right amount of passion to say oh yes! You know I love this genre, so this poem was a joy tho read and makes me want to get ought my pen and write again, and again and then head off to bed to die a little. ;)

[Trace]

This is one of the most wonderful compliments I have ever received.
thank you so very much. I am thrilled you liked it. enjoy you bed time my friend.

Huggs,,, Trace

[Dara]

Well this one certainly left me 'breathless'. So beautiful and full of passion. I believe you outdid yourself here Trace. I just loved it!!

[Trace]

Thank you sweet lady for your lovely compliments on this piece.

TRACE

[Kelly Scheppers]

You always instill passion to the third degree, and I like that in a poet!

[Trace]

A poet that has no passion, is nothing more than a purveyor of jiberish.
I am so glad that you find my words more than that.

Thank you so much my dear friend,

Trace

[Lily Mae]

You always knew how to do passion and desire right.. I had to catch my breath ...xo

[Trace]

my sweet friend, you just made my day.
Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments,

Trace

[cloud]

I love very much the passion throughout this erotic inspired piece.

[Trace]

Thank you so very much, it is always nice to see a new poet reading my work
and your comments and compliments are greatly appreciated.

Trace