Dangerous ~ a MsJewel and Trace collaboration

Dangerous ~ a MsJewel and Trace collaboration

A Poem by Trace
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" ~ having a little fun with my poetic friend, Julie ~ "

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Dangerous

Part 1 ~ The Lady

 

I let him drive my car…

 

Top down, 4th gear

hair, teased by the wind

as he takes the curves on Pacific Coast Highway

a little faster than is comfortable

smiling…that smile

 

Weak knees, blushing cheeks…

I try my best to concentrate on the moonlight

peeking through the clouds,

shimmering off the tide

                   in a sea of liquid light

the long stretch of deserted sand

beckoning moonlit paradise

              for lovers

strolling hand in hand

 

My head screams slow down

but the words are lost

in the beat of my heart,

                  racing

the butterflies in my stomach,

                              fluttering

my hand trembling as I reached for his

 

Without a word, he stops the car

taking my hand, kissing it gently

smiling…that smile

                             yes,

                                      it was then I knew

…..he’s dangerous

         

 

 

Dangerous,

Part 2 ~ The Gentleman

 

                 I want to go for a ride…

 

Will you drive?

 

I held her door, as she slid into the soft leather seat

handing me her keys

 

But was it the cut of her dress

or the demure pause

that made me hesitate

Oh, yes….

the exposed thigh for my admiration

 

So.... "she’ll let me drive "

I thought, as I started the car

“I’ve got this.”

 

Sure,  she knows how to drive this little German

and she looks “so fine”, her long blonde hair,

this shiny black convertible

 

But does she know what this little thing can do?

Does she know that I do know how to drive it,

to its limits?

 

The P.C.H. rolls out before us

as the moonlight beckons lovers to the beach

I see her exhilaration and anxiety

with every turn and every run through the gears

faster

and harder

I take control,

and enjoy the view

 

Excitement radiates from her fingers

as she pushes her nails into my hand

I slow this marvelous machine

to see the fire in her eyes

her breasts rising with every breath

 

The smile and nervous laugh makes me wonder

was it the driving….or the driver?

as I kiss her hand

I think to myself

…she’s dangerous

 

But….

I’ve got this

  

© 2015 Trace


Author's Note

Trace
Art ~ by Rob Hefferan "Romance Series"
Poetry ~ by MsJewel and Trace

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Wow. You both have it ! A great take from her,from his paired pens... Collaborations are really fun to do huh? You both should take a bow for this... (and than write an another)

bill

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Trace

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments,
you can find many of our collaboration.. read more
Yes my friend...you have got this...

Hugs, Julie

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

8 Years Ago

We have this.
What a fun write this was
Sort of like actually taking that drive togeth.. read more
Ohhhlala....the two of you still sizzle when you blend ink. Dangerous....but in a good kind of way. Wonderful artwork to accompany your words and the words are filled with great imagery. Quite the ride, Trace and Julie. Loved it. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much my dear friend.
I am so glad you enjoyed our collaboration.

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Added on October 30, 2015
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