My Love is a Promise

My Love is a Promise

A Poem by Trace
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A Valentine poem for my wife

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                           My love is a promise,

 

A Forever promise, something special,

Not just words whispered in the dark,

But words of a man that knew he had found,

The woman he had waited for,


 “My Valentine”


 My love is a promise,

Once given, never forgotten,

It was not just your hand I asked for,

But your heart,


It was not my lips you kissed,


But my soul,


  

My Sweetheart”


 My love is a promise,

An eternal declaration of adoration,

Of dedication, a souvenir of all I offer,

And life has never been better,


Since you came into my life.


 


http://t2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSoB8FsrlrbezkRFm2aWLF1VOaWSLx60KQ7jh5ZdBl_j99N2REM&t=1“My Lover”                 


My love is a promise,

Of all I am, all I have,

All I can be, and all I want,


I want it for us,


Forever,

 


I’ll love you forever,,


My Lover, Sweetheart, and Wife,


My Forever Valentine !!!

© 2016 Trace


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Aww, you should be writing these for Greeting Card companies, because I guarantee that there is not a woman out there that would not want these sentiments in her card from her husband, and few have the ability to really put it into words. What a wonderful Valentine's Day poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend for your excellent comments and compliments.
I am so glad y.. read more



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OH waw
your words melt on the page

what a sweet thing to write for your wife ...........

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

3 Years Ago

thank you for your wonderful comments on this piece,
Trace
...a lucky lady, that she is! I have always been impressed of how beautifully you write poetry for a man!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
I try to channel my inner babe when I write mushy stuff.

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Now this is a hallmark moment. You obviously wear your heart on your sleeve my friend. Your compassion shown in the piece is stunning. Lucky is the lady you wrote it for.

bill

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Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments and compliments on this piece.

Tr.. read more
So very beautiful, Trace! You are always a pleasure to read ...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much for your wonderful compliments.

Trace
Aww, you should be writing these for Greeting Card companies, because I guarantee that there is not a woman out there that would not want these sentiments in her card from her husband, and few have the ability to really put it into words. What a wonderful Valentine's Day poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend for your excellent comments and compliments.
I am so glad y.. read more
Awwww, Trace, so very romantic and I know your wife will cherish it. Happy Valentine's Day. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend for your heartfelt compliments on this piece.
Hope you have a wonde.. read more
Love romantic poetry and i'm really into it too.. :)
It was a good read! Thanks for sharing!

Keep writing more! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comments and compliments.

Trace
The love and devotion you have for your wife flows across the page, Trace. Very beautiful and touching. thank you for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
I am glad you liked my poem.

Trace
Just in time for Valentine's day. This was so romantic and heartwarming...Excellent, sir...:)............

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Trace

5 Years Ago

Thank you Sami for your wonderful compliments on my poem.
Your thoughts and comments are so .. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...:))))

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Added on January 23, 2016
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