Trail Ride

My heart beats no longer in my chest

I thought I had done my best

His face will not fade from mind

how did this barbed wire unwind

I thought I had found a clue

then out of the gate he flew

Sadness bleeds

untold needs...

 

Reviews

[deeps]

Wow! This is amazing
I really liked this one alot.
Wonderful flow here.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short but certainly bring out deep emotions of regret and loneliness... nice work

[Jim Clarke]

Bleak but powerful.

[Jared Hughes]

A short but simple poem. And it flows so nicely as well. Again, great job Tigra!

Jared

[Eagle Cruagh]

Lets see if we can fix the heart.
I`ll try to fix it if you will help
You have done your best you know
The barb wire is gone
The faces are together again
Just crack the whip, he`ll mind
Yes dear----Yes ----Yes
----- EAgle Cruagh