Trail Ride

Trail Ride

A Poem by Tracie Skarbo

My heart beats no longer in my chest

I thought I had done my best

His face will not fade from mind

how did this barbed wire unwind

I thought I had found a clue

then out of the gate he flew

Sadness bleeds

untold needs...

 

© 2009 Tracie Skarbo


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Wow! This is amazing
I really liked this one alot.
Wonderful flow here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but certainly bring out deep emotions of regret and loneliness... nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bleak but powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A short but simple poem. And it flows so nicely as well. Again, great job Tigra!

Jared

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lets see if we can fix the heart.
I`ll try to fix it if you will help
You have done your best you know
The barb wire is gone
The faces are together again
Just crack the whip, he`ll mind
Yes dear----Yes ----Yes
----- EAgle Cruagh

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 17, 2009
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Tracie Skarbo
Tracie Skarbo

Canada



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