Kitchen moments

I don't like the title...but could not think of another...

 

 

Steam off the coffee

Sugar and pie

Lie unfinished on the table

As I loosen your tie

 

Kick your shoes to the corner

Sit back and unbutton your shirt

Kisses behind your ear

I want to be your flirt

 

Leave your worries and troubles

There’s no room for them here

I don’t want them between us

I need to feel you near

 

Put your hand over here

And feel my heart pound

It’s a liquid vibration

To what I have found

 

A secret location

With layers so deep

Reacts to your scent

My passion too steep

 

Strong arms enfold me

I soar in the air

The quickened excitement

My hands in your hair

 

Promises given

With just but a glance

We’re off to the bedroom

For our lovers dance…

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. this was fantastic.. the flow, rhythm and rhyme very great! I loved the kitchen scene.. as if anyone has read anything or knows me.. it's I just love food as well as interaction! This lover's dance... has love, lust and profound yearning written it all over it for me! Just a glance.. the feel of a heartbeat.. steep passion.. Okay.. this is intense.. need a shower thank you very much.. which means.. I loved it all the way! I will be saving this one to FAVORITES!!! It's just so human... and richly embraced at that. =)

[cest la vie]

OohLaLa!!! or Calle Ocho!!..LOL

Very well written poem on the dance of seduction. Flirty, fun, sensuous yet still an air of mystery. nicely penned!!

[Jenny Nelson]

Very pleasant portrayal. Flows well from the time he gets home until, well, "off you go." Enjoyed reading this. Definitely gave off a romantic sense. Nice job!

[Stacey Watts]

Always nice to have a little bit of kitchen play. Very sensual erotic piece. Excellent job.

[Jack Joseph]

I usually don't like lover's poems; often overdone and saccharine (or overly dark). This piece is wonderful; perfectly balanced in a place we can all relate to. It reminds me of romance past, wine and holding hands; guiding each other into the next room.

Cheers!
-JJ

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Who cares bout the title the poem is awesome... nothing like those little sparks to light the flame, certainly the best way to cook in the kitchen. so delightful and sexy.