Perception

Something that came in meditation...

I see with understanding

With perception

And feel with indifference...

 

I hear with youth's independence

With innocence

And feel within solitude...

 

I touch without fear

Without judgement

And believe in the individual...

 

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

"I see with understanding

With perception

And feel with indifference..."

Let`s see if I understand this ?
You see with understanding and perception, in other
words you know this person, but you are indifferent.
Hmmm....Indifference, lack of interest, feeling or worth.

" I touch without fear

Without judgement

And believe in the individual..."

Something is in conflict here. I assume you must mean that
you believe in the individual as apposed to the group, the family, etc.
You still are indifferent to this person. Right ?

The perception must be in flux because the person is in love with you,
but you are indifferent. He throws rose petals on your bed and you
throw the sheets in the laundry. Right ?


" I hear with youth's independence

With innocence

And feel within solitude..."

The middle stanza bears the same schizm.
You hear with independence and inocence
but you feel alone (solitude).

Is this some trait you bring with you to each
lover ? Is it just this guy is perhaps too needy ?

Only the shadow knows !!!!!

-----Eagle Cruagh

[Imaneidie]

Such depth, and meaning. Says a lot about the author, and the eyes they see through. Unstained glass, untainted vision. Nice piece of work here. Look forward to reading more of your work.

[Geminair]

well im not going to do the psych evaluation lol too much logic kinda spoils things specially when life isnt like that ...anywhoo i really liked this and the open mindedness it was written with,if everybody was like that im pretty sure the world would be a better place thank you for sharing!

[*** Hey Jude***]

To see through the spirit, and not through wordly eye's. The words you share are full of wisdom as none of us are the person to judge anyone! Very touching! ~ Jude :-)

[Stacey Watts]

This says so much. Looking past all faults and seeing a person for who they truly are is an amazing gift. Excellent job on this one.

[deeps]

This is really wonderful.
I found this write to be of Acceptance
To like someone for whom they are.
This is wonderful, amazing flow.