Two Lovers In A Final Embrace

Two Lovers In A Final Embrace

A Poem by Travie
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I wrote this when I was bored one night.

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I lay here in your warm embrace, 
Under a blanket of bright stars, 
Listening to the sound of your heart, 
As the blood is running through your veins.
When I look into your pretty eyes, 
It's like my world completely stops, 
And everything around turns to dust, 
Like all that's left is you and me.
I feel your hand reach into mine, 
As our fingers intertwine together, 
A sense of deep passion overwhelms me, 
Our love making up surrounding energy.
You slowly turn your head towards me, 
Our eyes meet and you start to cry, 
As I gently caress your cheek with my hand, 
We softly whisper our final goodbyes.  

© 2015 Travie


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Travie
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Such a beautiful write!! :D Great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I enjoyed the poetry.
"When I look into your pretty eyes,
It's like my world completely stops,
And everything around turns to dust,
Like all that's left is you and me."
I thought the poetry was a poem of forever love. You left me with a good bye. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


So moving very good poem my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


The imagery is strong. This is incredible. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


╰☆╮This poem is almost musical. Beautiful work.╰☆╮

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Its curious how the height of a love sensation ... always gives way to a separation ... and longing. Its ominous about life.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Intimate and intense. Sometimes even final goodbye can be the most romantic moment.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love the meaning!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Travie
Travie

Milton-Freewater, OR



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