The Garden of Eden

The Garden of Eden

A Poem by Treo LeGigeo
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Set during the Industrial Revolution about a worker who wants to leave the factories and go back to a simple life of farming.

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Away from the smoke, away I go,
Away from the noise and the black snow.
No more will I labour before a machine,
Instead I'll work outside in the green.

Leaving behind the boring monotony,
I'll go and find a life of beauty,
For I will once again be in freedom,
Like we started, in the Garden of Eden.

© 2013 Treo LeGigeo


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Great Write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wonderful! This is great!

Posted 10 Years Ago


wonderful write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Back to the Garden, such a wonderful thought unfortunately not many could for the farming industry paid low wages and most workers had familys that needed food and a roof over their heads..........still a lovely poem of hope :O)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Incredibly vivid! Amazing piece of short poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I can't put my feelings in words, but just excellent poem. So much contained in eight lines. I love this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting pattern, I like the simplicity it holds and yet the words are in depth. I myself tend to write very long poems but I like short poems like this. Short poems that even in it's short length it seems complete. Also, I like that its metaphoric and yet awesomely well written in word choice and in arrangement. I think it could connect with almost anyone. Amazing poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice and simple. very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2010
Last Updated on April 3, 2013
Tags: Factory, Leave, Industrial, Revolution, Worker, Nature, Romantic

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Treo LeGigeo
Treo LeGigeo

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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I'm from Australia, so some people may find that I spell things differently. I love writing and have had a couple of publications of short stories and novellas under a pseudonym. I started .. more..

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