Brick by Brick

Brick by Brick

A Poem by Trevor
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This is the first poem I ever wrote, two years ago for my 8th grade english class! haha.

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I don’t know what to say,
or even how to speak anymore.
You’ve torn me down,
brick by brick.

I used to know you,
or so I thought.
But you’ve changed,
everyone has.

The nights I've spent
thinking about you.
The nights I've wasted
worrying about you.

It's over now,
if it even started.
I'm not sure,
but im happy now.

I'm living,
living only for me.
For the first time,
ever. 

© 2012 Trevor


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I love this one! Great Write!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazing piece, well written and it really builds a connections. Nicely done. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ella

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :) you are really good. I am excited to see your work. But are you sure you came here.. read more
Trevor

7 Years Ago

aw c: thank you again!
Ella

7 Years Ago

Don't mention it :)
Wow, great imagery! I love it! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trevor

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on September 15, 2012
Last Updated on December 8, 2012
Tags: hurt, depression, amateur

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Trevor

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Hi, I'm Trevor. I'm sixteen, and I've never really written into depth. That's why I made this; I want to learn. I was hoping some of you might help me with that, thank you. more..

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