Time Our Master

Time Our Master

A Poem by CrashDavis47

We live our lives by times restrictions.
Suffering ailments and other afflictions.

Never more beautiful than on the present day.
But ever so slowly skin pales and hair will grey.

Time is our enemy but also our friend.
Giving us life but requiring our end.

For this reason live life to the fullest.
Study the beauty in lifes every flaw.

There are no second chances,no room for error.
Time shows no mercy for that which is wasted.

From blistering heat to bone chilling Cold.
time rules everything new and old.

Forever and always time is our master.
For we are mere mortals whalst time is eternal.

© 2010 CrashDavis47

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"For this reason live life to the fullest.
Study the beauty in lifes every flaw."

absolutely amazing poem! each stanza was fluid, and read sort of like a dreamy song! Thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very deep with a slight sense of antiquity to go along with a subtle but provocative rhyming scheme that would make it easy to sing or act out this literature. Good right bro-Montana keep it up and review others so you can get some more reviews and views to expand your writing brilliance and legacy. Love you even though you are a Jew-niggard. Niggle


Posted 8 Years Ago

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