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A Poem by CrashDavis47

 

In this life, the great game

time rolls on

Ever changing never the same

Everyone lies starting little fires

Some feed the flame

Straining for their desires

The rest feel the pain

As their time expires

Looking back on life as a whole

At all the choices that stained the soul

One question held inside

Did I truly live? Or fail as I tried?

© 2011 CrashDavis47


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CrashDavis47
just rolled out like this sort of a rough draft. give your thoughts

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The emotions you have infused in this make this piece beautiful. It is something to make you think. Something I wonder from day to day. There is no rough drafts in poetry to edit it is to edit the soul. Leave it how it is.

Posted 6 Years Ago


so many choices in life... good expression

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 23, 2011
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CrashDavis47
CrashDavis47

denver, CO



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Im an aspiring author, what i want to do in life is write novels. Im trying to take a serious go at this so please comment and critique my writing. anything to help me be a better writer is welcome more..

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