Pencil

Pencil

A Poem by Tris
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, or Words if you want. Didn`t really find a name for it.

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 As I began to write,

Pencil in the hand,

The sadness began to hide,

Ideas in the head.

 

The sound familiar enough,

Safety recognized,

The world disappearing with every word,

My patience prized.

 

The tool running down the paper,

Some writing forming itself,

The pencil in my hand trembling,

Words flowing themselves.

 

 

© 2009 Tris


Author's Note

Tris
Just some crappy idea I had. It took me 5 minutes to write it, so don`t expect much. OK?

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Hey, I reviewed your writing. I think you`re good.
It doesn`t matter how long it takes you to write it, it is important what it results.




Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well I think taking to much time to write a poem comes out s****y...and this was great so..have your time limit be 5 min next time..it takes me 3 hahaha anyway good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you remind me of the author...david brook, his short story about the book... this is a great piece, keep this up. well scripted

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done. This poems is really good. I like your idea.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tris
Tris

Brasov, Romania



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Well, I like writing fiction, thrillers and somewhat horrors. I've began my own novel with vampires and werewolves, so you might wanna check it out :D I'm writing since I remember and always liked to.. more..

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