The Visit

Dont judge..i suddenly got an idea.

She was driving back from seeing him.
The man who she loved.
The man who was her husband.
The man who she had a child with.
The man who took her whole life away.
The man who went to prison.
The man who has been hung.

She saw it happen. She saw him get hung.
She remembered it. She remembered everything.
The dancing under the moon, him saying "I love you"
Getting married, having a child.
The child being killed.
Her family being killed.
Her house bursting to flame with just gasoline and a..

She jerked to the side.
The car skidded and rolled.
It kept rolling and spinning.
It finally crashed.
She was sent to the hospital.

She lay in bed barely concious.
She opened her eyes.
It was him..standing by her bed.
She screamed.

"Its ok honey. You're ok."
She woke up, and went downstairs to breakfast, carrying her child on her hip.

Reviews

[JustMeeSarah]

woah.
a real write!!
ahaha this is actually really good! I freaked for a minute...but it was okay(:

[TroubledMindsX]

thanks! lol :)

[scripted]

a dream more like a nightmare... this was simple but good

[TroubledMindsX]

thanks :) and yeah really! haha

[Forever Hidden]

It looks more like a poem then a story to me ;)

Well, I was relieved when this was just a dream! NIce work Kelli! Never thought you could write this good (Or write at all x) )

[TroubledMindsX]

Thanks! Haha I didn't know either! I've never really written down stories til now. Just kinda wrote them in my head :-P

[Forever Hidden]

:P
You should write more! Your pretty good at them :)

[TroubledMindsX]

Thanks! I might...not sure :-P

[Felicity's Eve]

Wow. I sighed so loudly when I found out that it was all just a dream! -.-"

Good job ^_^

[TroubledMindsX]

Hahaha i found it getting really depressing so i kinda just through that in there lol. Thanks :-)

[Felicity's Eve]

Lol I'm glad that you did XD