This is brilliant. What a way to write about celibacy -- and the pressures surrounding the maintaining of such a status. Your title is very appropriate, because in order to maintain celibacy, one can only go as far as a peek - anything else might go too far. Very nice flow here and your imagery is very good.
As I was unhappy with your use of the word Celibacy and I was checking definitions on Dictionary.com for Celibacy, Chaste, Virgin, etc. I noticed that one definition of Virginal was... 3. pure; unsullied; untouched: a virginal mountain stream. I also noticed that your picture was of flowing water and that you mentioned rivers and water in the poem.
I think of Celibacy more as a religious conviction that has nothing to do with a person of the opposite sex, but with your self and God. It seems to say "I will forgo the carnal pleasures of sex for a closer relationship with God."
Yet your poem is all about a woman who you will see some day and love as you peek over the edge. I think you mean to say that love is more important to you than sex and that when you find your true love, sex will be one of the many things you will share.
This is brilliant. What a way to write about celibacy -- and the pressures surrounding the maintaining of such a status. Your title is very appropriate, because in order to maintain celibacy, one can only go as far as a peek - anything else might go too far. Very nice flow here and your imagery is very good.
Very interesting. I have to admit this is a subject I don't see often, I think you did well with it. I like the flow of your poem, kind of a controlled rush. You did a fine job in just a few words, I like that.
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