Hello

Hello

A Poem by Benjamin L. Weekly
"

She said goodbye, my life said Hello.

"

Tears dripping

Falling in a storm

Out of a boy

A man is born

 

It was love

How bright it shone!

Then this girl

Left love alone

 

His heart was torn

Shattered aburst

But from the shambles

He found the pieces

 

His life pulsing

Breath barely clinging

Rose from the ashes

And said: "Hello" 

© 2008 Benjamin L. Weekly


Author's Note

Benjamin L. Weekly
First poetry in six months. Please be gentle.

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Wow, I loved this! :) I'm pretty sure about what you're trying to say: You fall in love, your heart breaks, you find enlightenment and become a better person. I really admire that it's short, sweet, and to the point; this little poem of yours definitely holds a lot of messages, and that's absolutely excellent!

I absolutely love how you ended it; it was very... enlightening and it wrapped everything up just perfectly. Great write. I really enjoyed it!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, I loved this! :) I'm pretty sure about what you're trying to say: You fall in love, your heart breaks, you find enlightenment and become a better person. I really admire that it's short, sweet, and to the point; this little poem of yours definitely holds a lot of messages, and that's absolutely excellent!

I absolutely love how you ended it; it was very... enlightening and it wrapped everything up just perfectly. Great write. I really enjoyed it!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It makes you realize that even though you find love it can be ripped apart. And when you feel like giving up, your life tells you to keep going. It's really good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This gives me a sense of reincarnation. I liked it, it was simple and well said.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Benjamin L. Weekly
Benjamin L. Weekly

Roseburg, OR



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I am 22 years old and live in Roseburg, OR. I presently work full time. At my job, I handle second tier tech support by phone and answer emails for a major company. As such, I have the privilege of.. more..

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