Hello

She said goodbye, my life said Hello.

Tears dripping

Falling in a storm

Out of a boy

A man is born

 

It was love

How bright it shone!

Then this girl

Left love alone

 

His heart was torn

Shattered aburst

But from the shambles

He found the pieces

 

His life pulsing

Breath barely clinging

Rose from the ashes

And said: "Hello" 

Author's Note

First poetry in six months. Please be gentle.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Wow, I loved this! :) I'm pretty sure about what you're trying to say: You fall in love, your heart breaks, you find enlightenment and become a better person. I really admire that it's short, sweet, and to the point; this little poem of yours definitely holds a lot of messages, and that's absolutely excellent!

I absolutely love how you ended it; it was very... enlightening and it wrapped everything up just perfectly. Great write. I really enjoyed it!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Dysis]

It makes you realize that even though you find love it can be ripped apart. And when you feel like giving up, your life tells you to keep going. It's really good.

[Jessica L Auster]

This gives me a sense of reincarnation. I liked it, it was simple and well said.