Chocolate

Chocolate

A Poem by Benjamin L. Weekly
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By request

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A silken whisper on my tongue
Breathes a word of soothing
It flitters and flutters
Full of fun
Away my worries are moving

A dreamy siren calls my name
The lullaby puts my aches to sleep
It spins and springs
A soothing song
Brings the rest of comfort deep

Waves of chocolate rush ashore
Wash my tastebuds afire
They blaze and they burn
A breezy brush
Makes my complaints a liar

© 2009 Benjamin L. Weekly


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The vivid imagery in this, along with the sensations called to mind by the title create for me a poem of feeling rather than something I can actually pinpoint why I liked it...but I do. It is almost like chocolate on the tongue...inexplicable.

"Waves of chocolate rush ashore" this image and the thoughts it brings is fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The vivid imagery in this, along with the sensations called to mind by the title create for me a poem of feeling rather than something I can actually pinpoint why I liked it...but I do. It is almost like chocolate on the tongue...inexplicable.

"Waves of chocolate rush ashore" this image and the thoughts it brings is fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Classic but dry.
Dr.Callaghan

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chocolate!
The words and thoughts it conjures up,like a dear friend, or a tease.........lovely warm piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


When does the Godiva store open?
This is a richly warm, soothing write. Something about it's silkiness..Nicely penned

Posted 9 Years Ago


you make me hungry!! XD nice poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is the first poem I've read about chocolate. I must say, I'm craving some right now.
Wonderful write. Reminds me of a Dove chocolate commercial.

Posted 9 Years Ago


how did you know that was what I needed?

it's lovely and warm and soothing

thank you

Posted 10 Years Ago


I feel ... this is nice. chocolate. ... I really wish I had some right now.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Benjamin L. Weekly
Benjamin L. Weekly

Roseburg, OR



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