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Chocolate

Chocolate

A Poem by Benjamin L. Weekly
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By request

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A silken whisper on my tongue
Breathes a word of soothing
It flitters and flutters
Full of fun
Away my worries are moving

A dreamy siren calls my name
The lullaby puts my aches to sleep
It spins and springs
A soothing song
Brings the rest of comfort deep

Waves of chocolate rush ashore
Wash my tastebuds afire
They blaze and they burn
A breezy brush
Makes my complaints a liar

© 2009 Benjamin L. Weekly


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The vivid imagery in this, along with the sensations called to mind by the title create for me a poem of feeling rather than something I can actually pinpoint why I liked it...but I do. It is almost like chocolate on the tongue...inexplicable.

"Waves of chocolate rush ashore" this image and the thoughts it brings is fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The vivid imagery in this, along with the sensations called to mind by the title create for me a poem of feeling rather than something I can actually pinpoint why I liked it...but I do. It is almost like chocolate on the tongue...inexplicable.

"Waves of chocolate rush ashore" this image and the thoughts it brings is fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is brilliant!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Classic but dry.
Dr.Callaghan

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chocolate!
The words and thoughts it conjures up,like a dear friend, or a tease.........lovely warm piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


When does the Godiva store open?
This is a richly warm, soothing write. Something about it's silkiness..Nicely penned

Posted 10 Years Ago


you make me hungry!! XD nice poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is the first poem I've read about chocolate. I must say, I'm craving some right now.
Wonderful write. Reminds me of a Dove chocolate commercial.

Posted 10 Years Ago


how did you know that was what I needed?

it's lovely and warm and soothing

thank you

Posted 10 Years Ago


I feel ... this is nice. chocolate. ... I really wish I had some right now.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Benjamin L. Weekly
Benjamin L. Weekly

Roseburg, OR



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I am 22 years old and live in Roseburg, OR. I presently work full time. At my job, I handle second tier tech support by phone and answer emails for a major company. As such, I have the privilege of.. more..

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