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Electricity

Electricity

A Poem by Benjamin L. Weekly

My body tingled
When she smiled at me, bolted
Electric
I am her lightning rod

© 2008 Benjamin L. Weekly


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Amazing poem for 20 seconds :) Your choice of words and flow are magnificent...What a write!

B.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This makes me feel really good like lightning. Great write in so few words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like the last line the most. you're one of the 10 finalists for the top three of the short contest.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice........that you can ignite such a response, and choice of words are perfect to describe that.
Zap........might have been nice to see that somewhere in here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Description: Zap! I wrote this in 20 seconds, like a lightning bolt.

my response: (not surpised by your astounding talent)

You did????
...then it came from your heart. LIGHTNING ROD.
This is phenomenal in its short breath.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an interesting poem... nice flow

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 25, 2008

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Benjamin L. Weekly
Benjamin L. Weekly

Roseburg, OR



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I am 22 years old and live in Roseburg, OR. I presently work full time. At my job, I handle second tier tech support by phone and answer emails for a major company. As such, I have the privilege of.. more..

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