War of Robotic Entities

This is a metaphorical piece of coarse.. u can also of coarse get whatever you want out of it. also this is the first piece I've posted in a very long time so i hope that yall like it!

soul burning
remote control plugged in
battle, trenches dug in
raindrops got circuits frying
hearing screams but nobodies dying
no sinning leads em straight to Zion

thoughts of peace, behind iron minds
but he's flesh programmed, so its war-time

he's cold, steel
strapped up, but still
can't escape the fear
could barely even hear
but understood his orders clear
letters to family begin with dear
I'm coming home, make sure your not near
before he pressed the button, shed one greasy tear

thoughts of peace, behind iron minds
but he's flesh programmed, so its war-time

Author's Note

.. if u want to get an ambient feel of what i was feeling i was listening to EL-P - Infokill (instrumental) when i was writing this, you could look it up on youtube..

Reviews

[H-Jonesy]

A very powerful piece this is, the flow is amazing as well.

"thoughts of peace, behind iron minds
but he's flesh programmed, so its war-time"

A line that can easily be the best part of this. Again, a powerfull piece that was wonderfuly put togeather.
Thank you for sharing, and keep it up please, id love to see more.

[Abigail T]

Oh... my goodness. So powerful and heartbreaking!
"but he's flesh programmed, so its war-time" ... damn, you for sure got me with that line. This is a wonderful piece of work! You really know how to spin a tale beautifully.