Should we take the risk?

To risk it all,

And then to fall.

Yet what we desire,

Is still up higher.

 

Despite that, we still reach out,

Even though the risk is without doubt,

Yet we still take the chance,

And with this fire we dance.

 

The more we risk,

The more we could get.

But are we willing,

To take the bet?

 

But we still desire what is unattainable,

The reasons we risk is unexplainable,

That apple always out of reach,

And the lessons it will always teach.

 

Author's Note

Dedicated to Dreamer as she was my inspiration :3

Would LOVE it if you criticized and commented!! :)

Reviews

[Daytonight]

This is a beautiful poem. You have expressed yourself well. Keep on penning.

[Nicky Wilson]

Risking it is definitely something Dreamer had to be pushed to do ;) so I completely understand the dedication but we all need to take risks despite the fact that we might get let down sometimes this was a good poem ! Nice job keep writing !

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is beautiful! For twelve years old, you write so maturely! Your word choice is exquisite, and you tell a story of trying against all odds. Beautiful job, my dear = ]

-Brittany

[Becky C Strukamp]

This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it a lot. You penned it well. There's a big message in this poem..an important message...reach for your goals...the nroad may be tough or easy but you will never get there if you don't try.

Send me some read requests ...I would like to read more of your poems. Thanks for writing them and sharing.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like this...I look forward to reading more of your work.

[kdpgrahi]

Wow, excellent Truth, you have an amazing talent . I love your poem very much. Please carry on to present us with such good poems to read and enjoy

[kdpgrahi]

Wonderful. I love the poem very mcuh

[Dreamer]

awww thank you very much truth! I see u've posted it:) I thank you for understanding my poem "reach for it...if you dare!" and taking the time to write this:)

[chelsea]

this is really good :)