Young Daffodil

Young Daffodil

A Poem by T*Fuyumi
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An unfinished original lyric composition. I have the melody in my mind, but as I'm clueless with instruments, these shall remain as words. P.S: Daffodils represent hope ((:

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Remember when you were young?
You thought where you went was the world
And everything seemed so near
Like nothing could ever tear them away from you

You got fresh apples,
Never had them brown
Wanted some piggybacks,
Daddy lifted you up
And all of this time, your favorite daffodil
Bloomed, ever so warmly.

© 2012 T*Fuyumi


Author's Note

T*Fuyumi
I'm too lazy to finish it up for now 'cause life is hectic.. Tell me how you feel ^^

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I love how you represent daffodils as hope...this was a sweet beautiful poem....great job :):):D.

Posted 6 Years Ago


T*Fuyumi

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I did some little research on flowers and found out their meanings so I could make use of.. read more
Lonely Islander

6 Years Ago

:-):-):-D.
very nicely penned. when we grow up, we forget we were young and dependable..

Posted 6 Years Ago


T*Fuyumi

6 Years Ago

Hey there! Thank you for the review~! ^^ And yeah, that's a good point brought up that summarizes th.. read more
khalid

6 Years Ago

you are welcome, its really nicely penned
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JC
i think it is finished...very real with a lot in a few words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


T*Fuyumi

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your lovely feedback! :D
I'm glad this short piece was pleasing ^^

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Added on December 22, 2012
Last Updated on December 25, 2012
Tags: unfinished, original, lyrics, composition, tsukishima, fuyumi, blooming, daffodil, growing, up, childhood, innocence

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T*Fuyumi
T*Fuyumi

Singapore



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19 year old Singaporean ^^ T*Fuyumi is my pen name/writing alias ^^ Writing as a really small side hobby~ Truth be told, I'm not talented in writing at all, as proven to myself through my school gr.. more..

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