Falling

Falling

A Poem by Jim Lozkittle
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Another poem written on the basis of depression

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The monotony is getting to me
I'm falling away from this life
Slowly but surely.
I'll get up eventually
But it'll be longer than expected
No matter what I use to get lifted
I always end up dropping.
At times I'm happy
But rarely is it real
I wish I could hold my head up high
But it's just not how I feel.
This life is a bore
I only wish for more
And I can't seem to grasp
What I'm ever gonna need
To end this lapse of a wasted life.

© 2010 Jim Lozkittle


Author's Note

Jim Lozkittle
The rhyming is rather random

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This struck an extremely heavy chord in me! It's as if you poked at my mind a little and wrote EXACTLY what I was thinking. This is very sad, but very good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


good begining poem, however id suggest to not focus on the depression of the situation. its just really used and old at this point, i always try and make them hopeful at some point. it helps the poem have some depth to just the stright "i hate myself and i want to die" attitude.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like, wow, i can totally relate to the feelings expressed in this poem, its really good

Posted 9 Years Ago



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