This Girl I know

This Girl I know

A Poem by Jim Lozkittle

This is about someone very important to me in my life right now :)

Let me tell you about this girl
She's my whole entire world
She makes me feel like flying
Instead of lying on the floor dying
I'd give her anything she ever needed,
I wish I could give her more
But I only got what I have
And I ain't much for stealing.
This girl is my world
She knows how to be
Without even realizing how happy it makes me
All I wanna do is make her smile
Make her laugh
Make her feel like she needs no cars
When she's together with me
Because when I'm with her I can't describe
How she makes me feel inside.
This girl is my entire world
I'm deep in love
Swimming blind
Not afraid of what I'll find
With you near
Staying close
No matter what is on the approach.

© 2010 Jim Lozkittle

Author's Note

Jim Lozkittle
A little change up from my past two

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There's something about this that just feels sterile. You say she's you're whole world, but the way you describe it feels passive. Describing how you wish you could give her more material things when there is obvious happiness there to replace any material needs seems out of place.

Posted 9 Years Ago

"I'm deep in love, swimming blind" Oh, this is wonderful!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on September 10, 2010
Last Updated on September 10, 2010