This Girl I know

This is about someone very important to me in my life right now :)

Let me tell you about this girl

She's my whole entire world

She makes me feel like flying

Instead of lying on the floor dying

I'd give her anything she ever needed,

I wish I could give her more

But I only got what I have

And I ain't much for stealing.

This girl is my world

She knows how to be

Without even realizing how happy it makes me

All I wanna do is make her smile

Make her laugh

Make her feel like she needs no cars

When she's together with me

Because when I'm with her I can't describe

How she makes me feel inside.

This girl is my entire world

I'm deep in love

Swimming blind

Not afraid of what I'll find

With you near

Staying close

No matter what is on the approach.

Author's Note

A little change up from my past two

Reviews

[D.R. Wilsey Jr.]

There's something about this that just feels sterile. You say she's you're whole world, but the way you describe it feels passive. Describing how you wish you could give her more material things when there is obvious happiness there to replace any material needs seems out of place.

[Alexa Aiden]

"I'm deep in love, swimming blind" Oh, this is wonderful!