Sappy

Sappy

A Poem by Jim Lozkittle
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This song is really sappy, I know it lol

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When I see you I'm pushed into an ocean of lust.
When I look in your eyes I can't help but feel surprise
By the ever occurring feeling I get inside
I want to keep you by my side
Until the end of time
Holding hands together
No matter what the weather
I know my cheese is high
But I hope it won't make you say goodbye
Because I'm a fool for ya girl
To me you mean more than the world
These butterflies can't be real
But with you I can't help but feel
Your love for me is true
And I know just what to do
I'll keep a smile on your face
No matter what the time or place
And I know I'm really sappy
But I always want you to be happy.

© 2010 Jim Lozkittle


Author's Note

Jim Lozkittle
Sorry for all the love poems, lol

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Its good.. a little sentimental but it serves its purpose. The emotion is there I just think maybe digging a little deeper would really make the point be potent. Good stuff tho, no doubt.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 10, 2010
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