Without U

I wrote my first lipogram! The letter I omitted from this piece is (as the title states) U. I hope you guys enjoy :)♥

The world is a crowded place
Noisy, chaotic and hectic
I become calm when the planet sleeps
So looking from this perspective
It makes life somewhat poetic
How peace and serenity can only exist
When there is this chaos in my midst
A necessary paradox to feel alive
A needed contradiction to thrive
Something one has to see in order to feel free
A feeling of peace can only be consistent
By realizing with disorder, it's coexistent

Reviews

[Aura]

"I become calm when the planet sleeps" I love this line!, the night is so peaceful and it can be poetic! When I read the title I thought of without you... as in a person object or thing! I didn't think of it talking about the letter U.... as in you omitting letter sound U from your poem! Thanks for sharing I enjoyed reading!

[SkinlessFrank]

Lovely poem so full of clarity.

[Lala]

Thank you!!

[Koala]

I can't stop crying after reading your words

[Lala]

Awh sweetheart! Although I don't ever want to make people cry, if it is through my poetry I consider it to be a compliment. But I do hope you're okay ♥