Dear

Dear

A Poem by Ubiquitous
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Short poem

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I must say, you will be missed dearly

As it stands, I can hardly let you go

But, dear, after you have pushed me as far as you have,

Through all I’ve put up with,

I’m absolutely pissing myself at the opportunity to be your bestest friend!

I’ve decided I’m quite finished with your s**t, dear.

© 2012 Ubiquitous


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I never thought I'd reply this to a poem, but "lol" I guess is the most appropriate term. You just hit on something very universal, we go that extra mile for people we really like, but the lack of reciprocity sometimes is just gawd-awful! hehe, such is timing and inappropriate feelings, that's life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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haha good work :) my life is quite like this alot of the time, so tis peom really hit home. it gave me some relief to know i'm not the only one feeling it :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


Good. F**k em. We don't need parasites in our lives!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Goodness, powerful read i must say!
Well expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There must be a breaking point with a person, everyone has one. Though they might not express or say it. We all hold in our emotions and expect people to see them...problem is, we can't express them if we won't tell anyone. No one will know how we truly feel inside unless we tell them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Good use of sarcastic flair. It's a funny-solemn poem. the funniest part is what you've written in the author's note. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, it's very relatable.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like it... i could so relate and it was just amazing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved it! It was something we all could relate to at one time or another. I absolutly love your poems!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I never thought I'd reply this to a poem, but "lol" I guess is the most appropriate term. You just hit on something very universal, we go that extra mile for people we really like, but the lack of reciprocity sometimes is just gawd-awful! hehe, such is timing and inappropriate feelings, that's life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I find the open expression of one's self from deep within to often be spiritually uplifting at times. I love the honesty of your feelings.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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