I hope you burn

You presume I am joking
When I feel like hurting you
Your eyelashes keep fluttering
On your eyes, sickeningly blue.

Of course, you don't mean no harm
But I see right through your game
You may think you have the charm
But I have much better aim.

Remember, my little friend
I know more than you want shared
Your bones, effortless to bend
Rest assured, you won't be spared.

Reviews

[just is]

Such anger and angression in your words.
I can feel the heat coem off these words,
they are fierce. Like this

[Canicus]

I like it. anger in this converting it to vengence. good write

[Dream Weaver]

Just a little hostile are we? Strong and
directly to the point which in my
eyes makes it a very good write....:)

[Wolfwind Words]

For some reason this brought forth the image of a little child with a sling shot, going hunting after some sort of bird or something. The feelings of mischief and revenge seeped from the words.
A very evoking piece.

Aaron Wolfie Maycroft

[An owl on the moon]

There is a fierce determination in your words... and though the reason for the hatred is left as mystery to us, you create a sense of anticipation for the pain that will come.. eventually.. and without regret. So strikingly voiced.