Hear Me Now

It is meant to be a lyrical poem with aspects of industrial metal. More bout the mental health system in schools. I am not sure f its complete but it is good as is to me. Certain vocal instructions ()

(Powerful deep voice background)
Behold the white horse
It writes in the tongues of traitors
It speaks as the broken and hopeless do
He's

(Weak whimper)
Writing upon pages and pamphlets
Saying hear me hear me
I come baring a truth
But I don't want your life
Just a second please
I don't want your love
Just for You to Believe me.....

What should we do?
Who are we?
What did we say...?

(Main lyrics)
We say!
Hang them n*****s high!
We got a god in the sky
Lending us the ropes
We hold all your hopes
We hold all your f*****g dreams
Time for little jonnie to die it seems

You're gonna be a F*****G STAR
Bodies and bullets
Forgotten truth and Satan's return
Rejoice Christ is HERE
With his dick shoved down Sunday school
With his dick washed are pills and verses
Shoving it down baby's bodies
You F*****s need god
Take a pill and shut the hell up
Silencers on my mind
Full auto on my brain
Now we all sing along
Hear me now
Hear me now
Common cold
With bodies
In the hall way
Silent no more
Silent No more!

I'll look lovely in coffin
Dead a day, ain't it sad
Mom and Dad
Still can't see
Who fucked me?
Was it me?
Was it you?
Mommy and Daddy
School
Devil
I say it was Jesus
You say it was the devil
I say Hear me now!
It was me
It was you

No it's f*****g lie
Guns, god, and government
All wrong and always right
The devil in TV
And f*****s and n*****s
Here's a gun prove me wrong
Listen Here
Listen Here
Forever silent
Forever Silent
Hear me now
Hear me now
Hear me please
Take my life
Take my joy
Gave me a gun
Give me a voice

Today yes
Blow our mind
One of a kind
Dead children w***e
Don't be a bore
What do you need?
Agenda fear control
Listen to us
Listen to me
We know what you need
You’re a puppet playing nobody
We’re the devil playing saint
We made you
We know what you need
Now shut the f**k up and die
No ears no eyes
Nothing in Team but us
Fill you with what you need
What you want

Author's Note

Keep an open mind and remember that the ()( are vocal styles not part of the poem.

Reviews

[littlewhitebird]

Once again, you have blown me away. I especially loved verses five and six, aah, so good. I like the way you portray the main idea, express it in your own words. You'r opinions seem very broad and compelling to me.

[Lexi Villanueva]

Its unique and full of exadiory points

[UndeadWill]

Thank you

[Lexi Villanueva]

welcome

[UndeadWill]

I will post more when I have time

[s y e]

Why, you have a unique idea in trying to help imagine the vocal point of the poem. That was smart! Wish I thought of that... Haha.
This was really good! Flows well and well written, well done!

[UndeadWill]

Thank you. Its about how kids feel like they have no voice and they use the only thing loud enough to make all the torment stop. Or for everyone to pay attention to their pain. And the media gives them their 15 minutes only to cover up the issue.

[s y e]

Yeah. I know what you mean. It was really good.

[UndeadWill]

I have much more shock poetry to post if you like to read it

[s y e]

Yes I would!