Sorrow Soul

Sorrow Soul

A Poem by Khal Attero

Summoning my wrath upon you,
A fierce matter that will give me
A chance to forgive the unforgiven.
Lost in reality that I have created,
In this great revelation, I hate.
This is my punishment for being naive.
With this perception I will roam,
Alone in this empty gray world, 
No one to hear my sorrow tears of hate.

© 2012 Khal Attero


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very nice. I particurally like the last line and the fourth to last. They are, I think, the most memorable lines but this is all really good.

Well done mate :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2012
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Tags: Hate, Soul, Sorrow, love, hell

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Khal Attero
Khal Attero

Croatia



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Im not one of those who reveals too much personal information online, so ill make this short. My real name shall I not reveal, at least not yet. Im born and raised in Croatia, but Im not Croatian. Im .. more..

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