Eyes Of Dark Beauty

A Woman with beautiful eyes,

Is a gift from the depths of the nether,

Born to deceive young souls,

As she brings plague to its fools.

Her beauty brings damnation.

 

The diabolical in her eyes,

Shall never fade away.

No Man can resist such great magic.

Feeble fools shall  move on,

Until her soul is no more in the realm of life.

Blood has been shed for the heretic w***e,

Stupid man sorcered by her beauty.

 

Her beauty shall enchant,

Her magical eyes shall prevail,

As she seeks nothings else but to deceive.

Her power mightier than a sword in a battlefield,

She is indeed a creation of the dark.

Reviews

[Erika Jones]

I've really enjoyed this poem. It describes women down to the core. Makes me regret being a woman all together. LOL.

[kayla]

I enjoyed this poem; well thought out(:

[Pikachu]

I love this. You made women sound amazing!

Gotta give you props. (:

[Tasha]

I loved the concept. Great job.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this piece. I loved the concept of it. The creation of dark. I think a lot of women could be that way. Thanks for sharing.

[Ascending]

My type of women - I liked how you described the women, very straightforward and clear to understand.

[MoriartyMesa]

Has a Bon Jovi hint to it, but this is something that I can honestly see a heavy rift and drum solo with. Maybe Dio.

[Heather Clayton]

I really enjoyed this poem.