Just One More Drink

Just One More Drink

A Poem by Underestimated

Charm is deceitful, and beauty is vain, but a women who fears the Lord, she shall be praised. Proverbs 31:30


Just One More Drink


You drink it

And now you’re drunk

You can’t tell what’s right and what’s wrong

The fragrance, the warmth of it is ruthlessly tantalizing


Their words are like an enchantment

A polishing of the appealing skin

But deep within you are fading endlessly

You just want more of it


The approval, the brilliance, the eminence

If your ears deafen when the throngs cheers

Then you think you are fulfilled

You have finished drinking, but no

You want more of it


It seems you can’t stop

You still want the face in the looking glass to be lovelier

The figure in the photo to be thinner

Just to have praise for whom you are


And alas, when you want to stop

To halt this insanity and madness

Give a finish to existing for an adulation filled world

You resolve to have





But you want more

© 2012 Underestimated

Author's Note

Tell me if the subject is clear enough. I am sometimes too vague with my poems and people don't understand.

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yeah you're right..this poem is good..nice job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Good poem :) I thought the subject was clear enough. Well done XD

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is a powerful message. Last stanza is very clever. Welldone

Posted 8 Years Ago

I really like this! I also love the style, the main words bigger than the others is really impactful (not a word lol), great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

your message is strong and clear it rings out and is all to true. The great thing or down fall at times is all of life is like this, and we are in a constant struggle for balance.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This in my veiw is amazing. keep up the fantastic work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 17, 2012
Last Updated on May 17, 2012
Tags: charm, flattery, drink, empty, praise, fame, glory, self-esteem



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