Confused

Confused

A Poem by Underestimated
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A personification poem about struggle.

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I whisper, I scream, I cry, confused

I am struggle,

Your tear stained cheeks,

The sweat sliding down your face

The rope burns on your wrist

I weaken, I kill, I craze, confused

I am your strain,

The aching in your arms

The heft on your back

The murder of elation

I weep, I shriek, I moan, confused

I am your constriction,

The clutch on your neck,

I dwell in your soul

Collapse, satisfy, and reward my effort

Though I cannot comprehend how you conquest

I am a worker to weaken, never strengthen

I attempt, I fail, I conquest, confused

But only God destroys me

For he is the triumph, the win

I whisper, I scream, I cry, confused

© 2012 Underestimated


Author's Note

Underestimated
this is kind of disjointed, it could use some work. Any tips would be helpful.

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Emotional! :)

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I think it is amazing.

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Added on May 24, 2012
Last Updated on May 24, 2012
Tags: struggle, weakness, God, strength, cry, kill, scream, confusion

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I'm thirteen. A very young and inexperienced writer. I love romance, adventure and supsense writing. (and maybe, just a little bit of horror) But I am so excited to see what I'll learn being here! .. more..

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