All Alone

All Alone

A Poem by Underestimated
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This is a friend talking to a friend.

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You feel unaided in your problems

On your own in this stress

Like you’re the only person

That was ever caught in this mess

But you’re thinking a lie

You should know it’s not true

Cause I’m dealing with the exact same thing as you

I can see in your eyes

That you feel you’re alone

But I’m right here

And I know

I know

 

 

© 2012 Underestimated


Author's Note

Underestimated
Number two of writing frenzy. This is personally not me narrating the poem, I'm the person believing the lie.

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Very insightful for thirteen! It is very liberating when we finally realize that most of our problems, even if the situations vary, are shared by many others. Finding true friends, and trusted loved ones is a great treasure...and what a relief to know we are not alone in our struggles.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Simple and short. Love the flow and the word usage.
"Cause I’m dealing with the exact same thing as you" - beautiful!
You would make a fine friend:)



Posted 7 Years Ago


Good to have a friend to find understanding. I like the appearance of the poem and the kind desire in the words. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Yes I like this one ! thanks

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is like me, when I tell a lie, I end up believing it myself. And that is when the greatest of problems arise, my friend. Good thing I don't lie much :) good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Pax
writing frenzy is a good sign of doing something you enjoyed, so keep it up. problem and stress is part of life, we just learn how to deal with them, because You and i know...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hey I likethis..I've been through this experience..nicepoem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this. Short and succinct. I think you should keep up the frenzy. It's doing you good :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 26, 2012
Last Updated on May 26, 2012
Tags: alone, feeling, abandoned, lies

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Underestimated
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I'm thirteen. A very young and inexperienced writer. I love romance, adventure and supsense writing. (and maybe, just a little bit of horror) But I am so excited to see what I'll learn being here! .. more..

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