Entrance to Life

Do well and the world around me will change
some people know this
others find out
there are those that do it
and those who don't know
what its like to get out
I exit fear
begin a entrance
to life
writing this

 no advantage or pride

all the things I couldn't do
vicariously, sadly
and temporarily.

I couldn't do
faring with what is fair
I think I can 
know, understand, and care.

Reviews

[Ayushi Jha]

BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!